Creative Writing

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Griselle Colón
November 21, 2012
Word Count : 2,098
Loving Annabelle
Many love stories capture the reader’s attention by creating in their minds a
strong bond between the lovers of the story. Desire, passion, sweet melancholy, runs
through the body of those who separate from this world, those who find eyes, lips, skin,
the mere noise that seems to wake up every sense in their bodies.Oh! the romantics. I
shall warn you, that the story you’re about to read is full of what a person can understand
by love, but if you are waiting for a happy ending, for a solution, I should tell you to stop
reading and keep on going happily with your life.
It is always said, that your first love, is the most vivid experience you have, when
it comes to knowing a person completely. You realizethat eyes have another meaning,
that the smell can make your body tingle with happiness, that the lips of the beautiful
creature in front of you, can set every pore in your body on fire. There is no love like the
first.
Annabelle Klowsky was 6 years old, when she fell off the swings at Rosemary
Elementary School. Her tiny, skinny body wasn’t moving and she could only hear noises
from the kidsthat were surrounding her. She was desperate to wake up, but her body
seemed to refuse. None of the kids called for help, they just stood there, shocked, looking
at her lifeless body, when suddenly the circle opened and a kid approached her with
caution. She could hear the steps on the grass, that seemed to be like loud drums kicking

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on the floor. In a moment everything was very loud,and suddenly everything was silent.
She felt more and more scared by the minute, but when a little hand touched her light
brown, long hair, immediately the fear got away and calmness came to her when she
heard “ It’s ok, I’m here, I’m not going to leave you, I promise”. It is strange that this
kind of promise came from a 6 years old boy, Eric Gilbert. You may think that this is
were everythingstarted, how the story starts coming to life and begins to unravel the love
story between them, but I must fool you again, and tell you that their story began many
years before this day. You see, not many believe of the existence of other beings that live
outside our little bubble called earth. That they can have the answers to many of our
mysteries like fate or coincidence. I’m not talkingabout aliens, I’m talking about a
different kind of life; other beings that share a similarity with human kind and therefore
they can interact with us, but only secretly and with extreme caution; making sure not to
reveal their identities to others on earth, except the person assign to them. If you want to
stop reading, you are more than welcome to fold this paper and throw it on the trash can.You may think that after the incident with the swings the relationship between
Annabelle and Eric grew, but instead it took another direction, and for next 11 years they
never spoke a word to each other. Yes, they went to the same middle school and high
school, saw each other everyday at school, but not a word was exchanged between them.
Not until the summer before starting their Senior Year.Throughout their growing years
Eric became more social, and popular at school. He had many friends, popularity with the
girls, good student; the perfect high school boy. On the other hand Annabelle grew to be
a more quiet girl, self reserved, had few friends, and had only one goal in her life, Eric
Gilbert. Before Annabelle was born, her destiny had already been set to rescue Eric

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Annabelle came from a simlar planet to earth, million starts away form us. They knew
what was going to happen to earth and they created a mission to rescue only those
selected to live. The mission of the rescuers was to bring those selected safely to their
planet. All rescuers were sent to earth being only a fetus,...