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August 29, 2012

Topic: Writer’s workshop
Aim: what is a paragraph
Begin drafting our modern day folktales

If I had a superpower, my superpower would be time traveling. I wouldlove to go to different time periods and see how it really was there and interact with different people. I would also scare them and tell them all these different things about the future that would makethem nervous, just for the fun of it.

How would I use this power? I wouldn’t mess with things a lot because then the future would turn out a lot different. But what I would really like to do isgo and see things for myself. Instead of reading every single thing that happened in the past, why not go see in person? It would be like being in a movie, and actually proving that it reallyhappened. You could prove right from wrong, and if what they’re teaching us is actually true.

All those questions that don’t have answers could be resolved and the benefit of the doubt wouldn’t existanymore. There is no way we could be more precise about what happened in the future. Our information could be limited and we could actually solve problems we have now a day. In fact, it could be theanswer of all our troubles. Human kind in the past was way more intelligent than it is now. History would not be a plain regular old subject ever again. What is there not to love? It’s learning, havingfun, and traveling around the world and back in time with only a single blink.

One idea = one paragraph

Coherence: overall sense or understandability

It’s: it is
Its: possessive

Wrong:the group made it’s decision
Correct: the group made its decision

Tragic flaw

Emiliana is a 10 year old superheroe who’s superpower is time traveling into the past. She lives in the year 2050in an old apartment in new york city.

Chandler is an 12 year old boy who’s superpower is time traveling into the future. He has no sense of smell and linves in the year 2050 in an old...