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Writing portfolio, Assignment 3
Write a report about the sports facilities at UDLAP. Find three points to discuss, and suggest ways in which they could be improved. You will write at least 200words.
Your style will be formal and impersonal. This means you will probably use the passive voice
Use headings to organize the major points of the body of the report.
Outline
I. Introduction(heading)
Excellent fields to play soccer
The introductory paragraph states the topic and purpose of the report
II. Body Paragraph 1 (heading)
A. Describe a point that you want to comment on (a required improvement)
To improve those areas that are battered.

B. Offer suggestions and recommendations
To arrange the affected area with some fertilizers and not walking in that area
1.Mention how the suggestion might be helpful, or describe how the suggestion would work
It will work better if we put a caution sign.

III. Body Paragraph 2 (heading)
A. Describe a point thatyou want to comment on
Not to use football shoes if the people would not play.
B. Offer suggestions and recommendations
If people will run they can use the university circuit not the soccerfield
1. Mention how the suggestion might be helpful, or describe how the suggestion would work
Advise the students that the area for running it’s in the udlap ciruit.

IV. Body Paragraph 3(heading)
A. Describe a point that you want to comment on
Don’t bring puppies to the soccer field
B. Offer suggestions and recommendations
If people bring their puppies they are responsible ofwhat their pets do.
1. Mention how the suggestion might be helpful, or describe how the suggestion would work
When the pet has done something that could damage the soccer field penalize theirowners.

V. Conclusion (heading)
States your overall impression or opinion
In my opinion all the soccer fields are in excellent conditions.
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