Adopcion

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“ Adoption : friend, not foe”
a. The first paragraph is a hook of the writer’s life who was adopted.
b. In the second paragraph she makes clear her point of view about adoption disagreeingwith Rist’s opinion about adoption.
c. It does
d. 1. It perfectly does, she mentioned all the points and gave logical reasons to disagree with it.
2. she does make it clear in the secondparagraph she said she disagrees with all of the point given by Rist.
3. Yes she listed all Rist’s points and disagreed with them in each paragraph, she also mentioned and cited some of Rist’s ideas aboutadoption. She uses her personal experience as a support and also she mentioned some researchers that agree with her opinion about adoption. I think she used enough evidences that support her ideasabout adoption.
e. The organization is actually really clear, all of her statements all very clear there is nothing I would correct about it.
f. I would actually conclude better because it is not longenough compare to the body paragraphs, there are more things to conclude.
g. it does not as I said in the above answer.
h. Strengths : Hook, organization, clearness.
Weaknesses: Equivalence ofparagraphs ( length), conclusion.


Doctor We Need More Nurses, Stat!
a. The first paragraph’s function is to show the problem that is facing the nursing field and there is also the thesisstatement.
The body paragraphs explain every problem and show some proves that are related to these problems.
The last paragraph sums up all these problems as a conclusion and the author gives apersonal point of view or recommendation.

b. It does .
d.1 she mentioned clearly all the causes and the effects of these. She explains the importance of the trend.
2. the thesis statement is clearin the first paragraph.
3.every body paragraph develops either a cause or an effect, and she uses other researches and personal experience to support her point of view.
4. it seems to be correct...
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