Causse and effect essay

Cause-and-effect essay
I will write about the insecurity in Nuevo Laredo, its causes and its effects.
I will write to my teacher of English and my classmates.
The purpose of this letter is to know the why of so much violence and that happens if young people today are involved in such violence.
Thesis statement: causes and effects of insecurity in Nuevo Laredo.
Prewriting:
One morning whenhe was on his way to school, soldiers closed the road and we had to go in another direction, then we heard shots where the soldiers were. We asustamos all people and we did quickly flee from the place, it was a horrible experience. In this essay we will discuss insecurity in the city the causes of such violence and the lack of employment and drug trafficking; as also the effects: dirty money,assaults and kidnappings and to Parties not leave in the night.
Dirty money
Assaults and abductions
 
More drugs and lack of education
Not go out at night.

Dirty money
Assaults and abductions
 
More drugs and lack of education
Not go out at night.

Brainstorm:

Insecurity in the city.

Insecurity in the city.
Corruption
No work
Drugs
Died and arms
Corruption
No work
DrugsDied and arms

PLAN
Title: insecurity in the city.
Thesis statement: causes and effects of the insecurity of Nuevo Laredo.
I. Corruption and money dirty.
1. Give some money to the charge.
2. Is not well managed.
 
II. Lack of employment, assaults and kidnappings.
1. It is that people come to this problem.
2. Because people are involved in this evil you remove people that matter to you.
 III. Drug trafficking and not out of night.
1. Most of the abductions are made in the night.
 
 

 
Insecurity in the city.
One morning wen he was on his way to school, soldiers closed the road and we had to go in another direction, then we heard shots where the soldiers were. We scared all people and we did quickly flee from the place, it was a horrible experience. In this essay we willdiscuss insecurity in the city the causes of such violence and the lack of employment and drug trafficking; as also the effects: dirty money, assaults and kidnappings and to Parties not leave in the night. In this essay as I repeat we see clearly the causes and effects/ of insecurity in Nuevo Laredo.
Before this year of violence and insecurity all persons could leave, have fun and be sure outsidehis house. Now you can not leave because of the corruption that because you can do everything in order to give some money to the charge, the lack of employment means that persons entering the 'business' which just makes you drug and weapons cause fear people.
As long as there are effects of such causes such as the dirty money that it is named because it is money that was in a bad way, assaultsand kidnappings is/ because people who are involved in this evil you remove people that matter to you and finally cannot go out at night because the most of the deaths and kidnappings make at night and at parties.
As result the insecurityin the city is no longer as before, as for example before the insecurity they were only theft and small things; now there are deaths and kidnappings, corruption,weapons, the lack of employment and the drug trade. The result of the insecurity is dirty money, assaults and not you can leave now at night to parties or meetings that/ you can hijack. In my opinion I think that this is happening because the boys or young people find it difficult to study or go to the University and you look at the drug very easy to enter and hav money.
 

Insecurity in thecity.
One morning when he was on his way to school, soldiers closed the road and we had to go in another direction, then we heard shots where the soldiers were. We scared all people and we did quickly flee from the place, it was a horrible experience. In this essay we will discuss insecurity in the city the causes of such violence and the lack of employment and drug trafficking; as also the...