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Good Conclusion for a Paragraph
My friend Bob is a very hard-working man. Although he has to work in soft drink plan for eight hours each day, healso attends English classes at a community center. After his daily classes, he hurries to the plant, where he works until 1:00 am., standing in theassembly line inspecting bottles. He has to do most of his studying on weekends and also try to find some time to be with his family and friends. Hisrelatives, who have just immigrated to the United State, live with him, and he must help them adjust to American life. Bob doesn’t have much time tosleep or relax, but he never complains. In fact, he seems to enjoy working so much that people say he’s a “workaholic”.

Bad Conclusion for aParagraph
My friend Bob is a very hard-working man. Although he has to work in soft drink plan for eight hours each day, he also attends English classesat a community center. After his daily classes, he hurries to the plant, where he works until 1:00 am., standing in the assembly line inspectingbottles. He has to do most of his studying on weekends and also try to find some time to be with his family and friends. His relatives, who have justimmigrated to the United State, live with him, and he must help them adjust to American life. Bob doesn’t have much time to sleep or relax, but henever complains. However, his friends and family are disappointment because he doesn’t have a girlfriend or even a hobby to have fun in his free time.