English

WRITING ACADEMIC ENGLISH

LIMA, 2010

3D MOVIES

Listing:
* Poor plots
* It has good special effects and graphics.
* People act like if they were inside of the screen.
*Sometimes, 3D movies make you get bored.

Group A
Disadvantages
* Poor plots.
* Sometimes, 3D movies make you get bored.
Group B
Advantages
* It has good special effects and graphics.Writing the Topic Sentence:
“3D movies are a new alternative to watch movies because of their special effects and graphics. However, they have a huge problem with the plot they show”.Draft 1:

3D MOVIES PROBLEM
3D movies are a new alternative to watch movies because of their special effects and graphics. However, they have a huge problem with the plot they show. As aconsequence, people try to be part of the movie, but the plot is so boring and simple that when the movie finish they feel disappointed. For instance, when I watched “Avatar” I supposed it was going to be agreat movie. Instead of this, I found a movie with beautiful graphics but with an insignificant story. Therefore, 3D movies offer a new visual style to the spectators, but it’s insufficient if theydon’t have a good story.

Draft 2:

3D MOVIES PROBLEM
3D movies have disappointed to spectators because of the terrible plot they display. As a consequence, even though people intend to be part ofthe movie, the plot is so boring that when the movie finish they feel disappointed. For instance, when I watched “Avatar” I supposed it was going to be a great movie. Instead of this, I found a moviewith an insignificant story that made me feel weary. Moreover, many people opt for other kind of movies, such as drama, comedy, thriller, romance, etc., which have an intriguing story. Consequently,3D movies only get secondary prizes; that is, awards like best picture or sound editing. I consider it ridiculous because of the huge budgets spent in these kinds of movies. Clearly, unless 3D...