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Step 1: Free writing
Memorable event in my life
I had a lot of experiences in my life that are too important for me, but I remember day when my brother my father and I were camping in a forest in Colorado, we were in the sleeping bags and we were looking at the sky when a star move to fast, and before that the sky change his color to blue and then green and then red, we were very scaredbecause that, but then the people explain us that it was a natural phenomenon cause of the atmosphere but in this moment it was so weird for us. Is also remember a day when my brother, a friend, and me were going to jogging at the park, we were going to cross the street but my friend felt and in that moment a trailer was came in the street and my friend was thrown and he can’t rise by himself becausehe is a fat guy so I run very fast to help him because the trailer doesn’t so I save his life. The last summer my family made a trip to the beach in Sonora, I remember that trip because it was so nice because we visit many places and past a great time in the beach relaxing and swimming. I had also bad days in my life, one that I remember was a day when my dog died because he was part of the familyand all of us love him. Another day that was memorable for me is the day that I learn to drive because I was so young I was 12 years old, that they my grandfather told my ‘I’m will teach you to drive’ and I say ok that’s going to be fun, but it wasn’t because my grandfather scream me all time because I don’t follow his indications. The first day that I fought in boxing was a memorable event aswell because I was very nervous in that moment, but as well I was very excited, and I had a lot of adrenaline an emotion that I never feel, and I have a lot of people supporting me, so I was very motivated.
Step 2: organize ideas (listing)
* Family travel to the beach.
* Resting and relaxing in the beach.
* Delicious food.
* Ride in a boat.
* Fishing.
* Swimming on the beach.* Visit the family that lives there.
* Look many hotels.
* Lost in the way to the beach.
* Buy some souvenirs for the family in Juarez.
* Visit many places in the city.
* Take many pictures.
Step 3: Rough draft.
Memorable vacations with my family.
I remember the last summer when me and my family travel to the Sonora beach.
That trip was very funny because wedo a lot of things together.
First the travel was entertaining because we were looking the landscape and my grandmother telling stories about or childhood.
Then when we arrived in the afternoon we going to eat a traditional food of the place, it was a king of cocktail served in a coconut, and it taste delicious because the flavor was soft and natural.
After that in the evening we were lookingfor a hotel, but mi father was so undecided about that. Later in the evening we arrived to a little department close of the beach, and it was so hot! And we sleep outside in a beach cot.
Next day in the morning we went to visit many places in the city, and looking for some souvenirs for the family in Juarez.
Then we going to eat sea food in a restaurant and I taste delicious because the foodit’s fresher in that places and for that reason is better.
After that we come back to the hotel because we were very tired, and go to the pool and relaxing.
Next day my brother my father and I going to fishing close of the hotel, it was a new experience for us, and it was very difficult because the fishes moved a lot when you have it, but we can’t get big fishes only small ones.
Then in theafternoon we went to a ride on a boat, after that we stop in the middle of the sea and swimming for a moment.
Finally when we come back home, in the way was a group of cows and almost crushed with they, but my father elusive and save us.

Step 4: Rough draft corrections.
I remember the last summer vacations, when my family and I travel to Sonora beach to have nice vacations.
That trip was very...