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Chapter 23 ( *Rafael Pérez-Torres):
687 you’re brain is hollow. This should be “your” but is mistake is in original, should we leave? Also in note 10.
Should be “your”
688 Sam the Shame orSam the Sham?
“Sam the Sham”
691 II. A Pre-Millennial Funk. We will delete the II. before this heading because it is our house style to not use numbering headings. Also there is no I heading.Same for III. Relocation.
Deleting roman numerals is okay.
693 “War, Earth Wind and Fire or Carlos Santana”. It’s not clear at the moment what the name of the first group is. Would it be better as:War; Earth, Wind and Fire; or Carlos Santana (assuming this is correct)?
The use of semicolons helps.
698 through their first three albums. Should this be “through their next three albums” asone has already been mentioned?
Yes, “through their next three albums”
707 Refs. I cannot see that the following references are cited anywhere in the text. Please advise if they can be deleted(or should they stay?): Bogue 1989, Canclini 1995, Chambers and Leland 1999, Deleuze and Guattari 1986, Gilroy 1993, Lechner (no date), Lipsitz 1991, 1991 and 1994, Loza 1992, Manuel 1995, Pena 1985,Sanchez 1983.
Yes, they can be deleted. The citations are from another version of the essay.
Also in the discography not all have been found mentioned in text but I assume it’s OK to keep thislist as it is. One album that is not in the discography but is mentioned in the text (p. 9 of article) is Delinquent Habits Here Come the Horns (1998). Should this be added and do you have anyinformation for this? Also discography, Rage Against the Machine Renegades is missing a record number as all the others have. I’ve added the year (2000) as this was in the text but if would it be possible tosupply the missing number?
Keepnig the discography list as is is okay.
Delinquent Habits, Here Come the Horns, RCA 67559, 1998.
Rage Against the Machine Renegades is disc number 85289
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687 you’re brain is hollow. This should be “your” but is mistake is in original, should we leave? Also in note 10.
Should be “your”
688 Sam the Shame orSam the Sham?
“Sam the Sham”
691 II. A Pre-Millennial Funk. We will delete the II. before this heading because it is our house style to not use numbering headings. Also there is no I heading.Same for III. Relocation.
Deleting roman numerals is okay.
693 “War, Earth Wind and Fire or Carlos Santana”. It’s not clear at the moment what the name of the first group is. Would it be better as:War; Earth, Wind and Fire; or Carlos Santana (assuming this is correct)?
The use of semicolons helps.
698 through their first three albums. Should this be “through their next three albums” asone has already been mentioned?
Yes, “through their next three albums”
707 Refs. I cannot see that the following references are cited anywhere in the text. Please advise if they can be deleted(or should they stay?): Bogue 1989, Canclini 1995, Chambers and Leland 1999, Deleuze and Guattari 1986, Gilroy 1993, Lechner (no date), Lipsitz 1991, 1991 and 1994, Loza 1992, Manuel 1995, Pena 1985,Sanchez 1983.
Yes, they can be deleted. The citations are from another version of the essay.
Also in the discography not all have been found mentioned in text but I assume it’s OK to keep thislist as it is. One album that is not in the discography but is mentioned in the text (p. 9 of article) is Delinquent Habits Here Come the Horns (1998). Should this be added and do you have anyinformation for this? Also discography, Rage Against the Machine Renegades is missing a record number as all the others have. I’ve added the year (2000) as this was in the text but if would it be possible tosupply the missing number?
Keepnig the discography list as is is okay.
Delinquent Habits, Here Come the Horns, RCA 67559, 1998.
Rage Against the Machine Renegades is disc number 85289
714...
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