Globalización

Paula Natalia Pérez Ariza
2008258047
Hansel and Gretel
Hansel and Gretel were two poor children. They lived with their father and their stepmother in a small house near the forest. Asfood was so low, one day, the selfish stepmother convinced the father to take and to abandon the children in the middle of the forest.
Hansel y Gretel heard their parent´ s conversationand thought a plan to save themselves. Their plan was the following, when their parents will take them to the forest, they will mark the way with breadcrumbs, but to try this, the birds eatthe breadcrumbs, so they have to pass the night there in the dark.
At the next day, they saw a beautiful bird, so they decided TO follow it because it maybe knew , KNOW the way home, butthey arrived to another house, this had many candies and chocolate cookies, to came in to the house, they were captured by an ugly witch, she ate children, but when the witch saw that Hansely Gretel were a little thin, she feedS them FOR a few days to make fatten GET THEM FATTER to the children.
The day that the witch WAS going to eat the children, Gretel throwS her inthe oven with this action the children thought that the witch WAS going to be dead but the fire gave she HER powers, in the THAT moment that the witch WAS going to turn the childreninto animals, THE FATHER arrived the father who leaveS his wife for love at TO his children and he put her a rocket on the back to fly away from their lives.
The father and the two childrentook all the candies inside and outside the house to decorate their home and it looked as beautiful as the witch´s house. Finally the father apologized to the children and he promised THEMhim to never leave their sons alone.
THE END

It is very good , just see the mistakes in capital letters , Your grade is
3.5 in the writing part, you missed the speaking of it.