Language Arts

8th B

Language Arts/ Ms.Childs

Pre Writting Essay of an
Experience with a great lesson.

My experience is about one time, me and my step sister created

an account on a public webpage where you could share your

pictures and information without needing to add people like on

“facebook” and even though we where not allowed to create it because

we were eight years old.One day my step father checked my step sister’s

history of her computer and saw the web page, he got in and then he

saw a comment of a guy like ten years older than her saying that hewanted to meet her and stuff like she was cute so then, my step father

made a meeting with my dad and mom telling them about the situation

so after they all made a meeting with us two where theyprohibited us

the using of ‘’windows live messenger’’, the web page and ‘’facebook’’.

To describe more about the situation I can clearly remind my

best friend in that time that now livesin Uruguay, she told me about

this web site and she was like ‘’oh this page called ‘’metroflog’’ go on it

you should create an account there’’ and etc so I went on it and I

thought it waspretty cool so then I told my step sister to create one too

and she totally agreed but when we asked our parents if we could have

an account there they said no and even though that they said no,we

still created it.

Our lesson in this experience was to never ever again share

pictures or information of us in public websites where any type of

person can see it and also to neverdisobey our parents because at the

end of the day the only ones with a consequence was us.

And just because we didnt want to pay attention while our

parents where actually keeping us safe, andin a safe enviroment and

after what happened I realized how important is to obey your parents

because they want the best for you and it was really really really hard

for us to live without...