Redaccion de los inventos en ingles, nivel bajo

I will talk about 3 inventions, that revolutionized the world, The three inventions are:
The computer: The computer was built by University professor Charles Babbage, The computer is made ofplastic and metal. and is used for writing documents, internet and other.
The Chupa Chups The Chupa Chups was invented by the Spanish Enric Bernat in 1958 in Villamayor(Asturias), The Chupa Chups is madeof candy with a stick. The chupa chup is Spain's most famous invention

Coca-Cola was invented by John Pemberton in 1886. In the world today about 7000 Coca-Cola products are sold every second andThe coca cola is made of cola and secret ingredients

Redaccion de ingles:
I will talk about 3 inventions, that revolutionized the world, The three inventions are:
The computer: The computer wasbuilt by University professor Charles Babbage, The computer is made of plastic and metal. and is used for writing documents, internet and other.
The Chupa Chups The Chupa Chups was invented by theSpanish Enric Bernat in 1958 in Villamayor(Asturias), The Chupa Chups is made of candy with a stick. The chupa chup is Spain's most famous invention

Coca-Cola was invented by John Pemberton in 1886.In the world today about 7000 Coca-Cola products are sold every second and The coca cola is made of cola and secret ingredients

Redaccion de ingles:
I will talk about 3 inventions, thatrevolutionized the world, The three inventions are:
The computer: The computer was built by University professor Charles Babbage, The computer is made of plastic and metal. and is used for writingdocuments, internet and other.
The Chupa Chups The Chupa Chups was invented by the Spanish Enric Bernat in 1958 in Villamayor(Asturias), The Chupa Chups is made of candy with a stick. The chupa chup isSpain's most famous invention

Coca-Cola was invented by John Pemberton in 1886. In the world today about 7000 Coca-Cola products are sold every second and The coca cola is made of cola and secret...