English - Error Key 2

Your sentence Corrected sentence
Example My english is not very good. (spelling) My English is not very good.
1 When I was a child, I started reading the magazines. (article problem) WhenI was a child, I started reading magazines.
2 I have a very good time the last year when I read “The fencing master”. (wrong tense) I had a very good time the last year when I read “Thefencing master”.
3 However, I prefer to read mystery and thriller books or fiction and literature which are more entertained. (wrong word) However, I prefer to read mystery and thriller books orfiction and literature which are more entertaining.
4 Since I was young I spend a lot of time reading books. (wrong tense) Since I was young I’ve spend a lot of time reading books.
5 Ilike to read novels of mystery and histories that have happened actually. (wrong words) I like to read novels of mystery and stories that have happened now.
6 Which would prefer? Both of them,it’s depend the moment. (grammar and missing preposition). Which would prefer? Both of them, it depends on the time.
7 However I can spend an important part of my limited free time readingmy favourites books. (grammar) However, I can spend an important part of my limited free time reading my favourite books.
8 It is a good book, I recommended. (missing word) It is a good book,I recommend.
9 But I still like more printed books, they have something especial in their pages. (spelling) But I still like more printed books, they have something special in their pages.10 I agree with you about the cinema movies not being the same like books. (wrong preposition) I agree with you about the cinema movies not being the same as the books.
11 Personally Iliked the book more to the movie. (wrong preposition) Personally I liked the book more than the movie

12 I’m agree with Jordi when he says...(grammar) I agree with Jordi when he says...