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We all have had bad moments in our (pl)life.The wonderful thing is that we need to (ww)affront
them.This short story called "(mw)Casual Car Pool," written by by Katherine Bell, revolves(ww; use "revolves around")about a lesbian lady named Hannah, who has a relationship with a girl called Kate.They
both have the desire of having a child.She (who?) passes (ww)thought different(vag)situations such
as (ss, v)leaving her home,finding an envelope, and (ww)living it in the car pool. (intro, th)
First, she (was in a bad mood because she does)shift not agree with the things that her(ww)couple does toward her.In the following quotation we can notice how Hannah was wdy; use "disagreed"(under
disagreement) with Kate: "She v(would been) running late all morning, in a foul mood
atKate for hitting the snooze button one more time than Hannah could tolerate for
buying the wrong kind of coffee"(Kate 294).When I read this quotation(p) I imagine how
upset Hannah was with hercouple(ww). (dev, det)
Second, Hannah finds an envelope when she is leaving (unnec)from her home.(too much narration)They did not v(have
checked) the mail the day before.She gets the advantage of takingit, and she doesn't
let Kate know about this envelope.I believe that(p) at this moment(p) she does not care
about the consequences of her act. (p) " On her way out she’d discovered in yesterday’sunchecked mail the thick manila envelope that might change everything she should
have taken the envelope back into the apartment as a peace offering, should have
wanted to open it with Kate — it wasaddressed to both of them— but instead, she
brought it with her, leaving the rest of the mail for Kate to find when she finally
left for work ( katherine 294).This quotation is open to multipleinterpretations.(!trans)
One interpretation is that she just (agr)think about herself ,(cs) she is not respecting Kate.She
(ww; use "made")took a bad decision because she should have (v)respect her...